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When I see you feeling so empty,
I just want to hold you close to me,
Wipe those tears of fear from your eyes,
Wishing you could see your beauty.

Its clear to me that you're hurting,
A thought that tortures me inside.
I long to take away your pain ,
But that request has been denied.

I'll stand by your side forever,
Till death tears me away from you,
I'd never leave you willingly,
My love will always remain true.

Give me your sorrow, pain, and fear,
I would gladly bear them for you,
One like you does not deserve them,
In sympathy my heart bleeds too.

Listen to me and please believe,
You're beautiful as none can be,
Incalcuable in your worth,
Yet you give of yourself freely.

Be strong and know that you are loved,
Your trust I could never betray,
I'd hold you close comforting you,
I promise it will be okay.
:iconunheard-voice:
written for a friend i worry about sometimes. i know she has things of her own to worry about, but she still takes time to think of me occasionally. she has no idea how amazing a person she is. i hope this will make her feel better when she loses hope. i will always be there for her. i think she can figure out who she is. hey you! read and remember, every word is truth.

and if any of you are sad or lonely. pretend this is about you, it could be. hope you feel better.



comments always appreciated. thank you. enjoy


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:iconjellybean29178:
everything id do for someone and everything I wish someone would be willing to do for me...beautiful poem
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~unheard-voice Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favorite :) I'm glad that you liked it!
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:icongypsyfoxdancer:
I really wish a certain person had said that to me too. It is very lovely. :)
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~WolfySM Jul 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww ^^
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:iconaistaraina:
It's so beautiful...
Your friend truly is lucky to know and have you.
I hope your writing will last forever. ^^
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:iconthathippychick:
This is amazing, I love it. I can definitely relate to it.
Well done. Your friend is a lucky girl.
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~unheard-voice Mar 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:) I am glad that you enjoy it
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:iconsegelaskopi:
Thank you
I love it :D
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~unheard-voice Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome? lol, I am glad you like it. thank you for the comment.
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:iconallie-xx:
Kyuuuuuu! Pretty!
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