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Beautiful by ~unheard-voice:iconunheard-voice:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Fixed


When I see you feeling so empty,
I just want to hold you close to me,
Wipe those tears of fear from your eyes,
Wishing you could see your beauty.

Its clear to me that you're hurting,
A thought that tortures me inside.
I long to take away your pain ,
But that request has been denied.

I'll stand by your side forever,
Till death tears me away from you,
I'd never leave you willingly,
My love will always remain true.

Give me your sorrow, pain, and fear,
I would gladly bear them for you,
One like you does not deserve them,
In sympathy my heart bleeds too.

Listen to me and please believe,
You're beautiful as none can be,
Incalcuable in your worth,
Yet you give of yourself freely.

Be strong and know that you are loved,
Your trust I could never betray,
I'd hold you close comforting you,
I promise it will be okay.
©2003-2009 ~unheard-voice
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Author's Comments

written for a friend i worry about sometimes. i know she has things of her own to worry about, but she still takes time to think of me occasionally. she has no idea how amazing a person she is. i hope this will make her feel better when she loses hope. i will always be there for her. i think she can figure out who she is. hey you! read and remember, every word is truth.

and if any of you are sad or lonely. pretend this is about you, it could be. hope you feel better.



comments always appreciated. thank you. enjoy


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~ladyr May 31, 2003, 7:51:38 PM
If I hadn't promised myself I would never cry again...or a t least not for a LONG time...I would be in tears right now...that was so good and so amazingly sweet. You friend... she is lucky to have you...
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~lady-elf May 31, 2003, 8:33:08 PM
i like it it is sweet.....it made me cry though i mean i was all teary eyed before cause i am alone but this made the tears actaully flow and they hit the keys and now it is even harder to type like it wasnt hard enough to have a criipled right hand from being slaamed in a car door,,,it is beautiful i wish someone cared about me like that . your writing kicks ass... Heart

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I am nineteen years old. To a world-wise adult, i am little more than a child. To any child, however, I'm old enough to be distrusted, to be excluded forever from the magical community of the short and beardless.
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~keelystar May 31, 2003, 9:20:18 PM
That is one lucky girl to have you standing so loyaly by her side! this is so beautful!!!!!

I would cry, but i'll all cryed out for today...i'll cry over it latter more then likely.

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"May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks."

~InSnapeWeTrust
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~fire-goddess May 31, 2003, 9:44:54 PM
i'm gonna cry...this is one of your best works to date. you are such a loyal and caring person. i love this poem. Hug

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~Rachael
"but i being poor have only my dreams.
i have spread my dreams under your feet
tread softly because you tread on my dreams" *William Butler Yeats*
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~wingless-angel May 31, 2003, 9:53:24 PM
Clap Love

beautiful! It's great! You're great! Hug

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~depressedclown May 31, 2003, 9:56:03 PM
Lol-sorry to get all mushy- but i swear i could cry too! This one is definetly a favorite..its beautilf..so comforting..so nice...yeah lol- i love it!
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~romeosnotdead May 31, 2003, 10:19:13 PM
standing ovation to you and your friend. people like your friend just have a beautiful passion in life which should be supported as you are doing... they will never change themselves and it needs to be accepted, that some people are that damn awesome.

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Detest the phrase,"Nice guys finish last." We can finish first, I know we can.
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~princess-punk May 31, 2003, 11:55:49 PM
too bad there isnt a vote that is love deviation jeremy this is so awsome i really wish i had someone who cared like this about me especially in my times of need but unfortunately i dont i just want to go cry now so here i go Hug bye *goes into a corner and cries*

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I'm so confused... wait, maybe I'm not!
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~tcmw77 Jun 1, 2003, 6:57:48 AM
I dont get this website??
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~evil-piggeh Jun 1, 2003, 8:08:50 AM
i only read like 2 comments but i think all of em are like 'please be my friend?' everyone needs someone it just sucks some people dont get that luxury.
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